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img_e6243.jpgLay me down in fields of saffron
I cannot sing in thorns and briar

Many steps until forever
Distortion sealed in secrecy

Touch my hand and hold me closer
All the while eternally

Belatedly in solstice shower
A fool for you No more to be

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  1. Beautiful!!

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    October 11, 2018
  2. That was lovely Lynn.
    Leslie

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    October 11, 2018
  3. Powerful poem, Lynn. Beautifully told.

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    October 11, 2018
  4. “I cannot sing in thorns and briar”……but you saved your beautiful voice for when you crushed out of the thorns and briar.

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    October 11, 2018
  5. This is great Lynn! Love the imagery your words bring.

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    October 11, 2018
  6. Beautiful Lynn!

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    October 11, 2018
  7. Lovely.

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    October 11, 2018
  8. What a beautiful poem

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    October 11, 2018
  9. The poem is complex and beautiful and the landscape is splendid!

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    October 11, 2018
  10. Very beautiful, Lynn.

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    October 11, 2018
  11. Wow! Lynn, this is a wonderful poem with great strength, softness and intensity! I loved this and hope you continue to write and share your poetry with us! 😀

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    October 12, 2018
  12. Such depth of experience in this

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    October 12, 2018
  13. Exquisite imagery, Lynn.

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    October 12, 2018
  14. Powerful, and poignant words Lynn! The image is lovely.

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    October 12, 2018
  15. Wow! Amazing poem, Lynn!

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    October 12, 2018
  16. That’s lovely. Stunning photo too.

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    October 12, 2018
  17. Nature is always ready to listen to our songs. And those skies can hold plenty! Beautiful. (K)

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    October 13, 2018

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