26 thoughts on “Dreams in rhyme

  1. The sentiment is so well expressed here. You have overcome so much, Lynn – the rest will follow. Rather like pushing water to the crest of the hill, once reached it just gains it’s own traction and flows freely …. I believe you have crested your hill xxxxx

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  2. “Deceit in splendid fashion, Wrapped up in what was mine”.

    This sounds so bitter sweet, Lynn. I think that poetry’s success depends on how many people can read something in it that they can relate to. For me, this would be about the one I had lost. Your poem was melancholy, yet beautiful!

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