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Evaporated maze

Melancholy haze Jasmine ardor mingle

Punctuated phrase of time when she was single

Deadlocked and betrayed a dream that starts to dwindle

Abashed alone afraid a star that still has twinkle

Evaporated maze two worlds that do commingle

Triumphant stride of liberation in that she does rekindle

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  1. I love this Lynn. Perfect rhyming.

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    April 26, 2018
  2. Wow! Great job. Love the last line!

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    April 26, 2018
  3. Lovely!!!

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    April 26, 2018
  4. Very beautiful Lynz, It takes a good poet to make such lovely unforced rhyme.

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    April 26, 2018
  5. Speaking from the heart, well done Lynn.
    Leslie ❤

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    April 26, 2018
  6. Yes! Lynn. Triumph!!! ❤️

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    April 26, 2018
  7. Wonderful hope and strength in the end, Lynn. Beautiful poem. 🙂

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    April 26, 2018
  8. 👍❤️

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    April 26, 2018
  9. So very inspiring and hopeful! 🙂

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    April 26, 2018
  10. She rekindles, she sparks, she glows, she shines.

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    April 26, 2018
  11. Lynn, your words are beautiful, and the pictures are perfect for your post!

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    April 27, 2018
  12. I life story in a rhyming nutshell

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    April 27, 2018
  13. Wow! 😀 A triumphant poem, Lynn! The ending is upbeat, heading towards liberation.

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    April 27, 2018
  14. A lovely expression of renewal.

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    April 27, 2018
  15. Beautiful, Lynn! xoxoxo

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    April 27, 2018
  16. Yes the color has returned for always now. (K)

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    April 27, 2018
  17. Lovely Lynn…xxxx

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    April 27, 2018
  18. Absolutely delightful. I love your humorous side, Lynn.

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    April 27, 2018
  19. This holds so much within this lovely poem and double images displayed, Lynn! Smiles, Robin 🐦 💮🌷

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    April 27, 2018

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