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I love you I love you I love you

The perfect reflection of womankind

Molded from clay and desire

 

I love you I love you I love you

A worldy devotion transcribed in time

To walk with the angels on high

 

I love you I love you I love you

If only no words graced replendent lips

In vain all that passion ignites

 

If only If only If only

The shimmer and shine had not dulled your eyes

Worthiness gone in an instant

Sweep up your troubles and mop broken dreams

Fallen beguiled and bewildered

 

 

 

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  1. You are writing so well, sister 🙂

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    February 5, 2018
  2. Beautifully wistful. Lynx your poetry is lovely. x

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    February 5, 2018
  3. Lovely piece

    Liked by 1 person

    February 5, 2018
  4. It’s nice to see you…and with such a beautiful poem! Hope you are well ❤

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    February 5, 2018
  5. Holly’s ‘wistful’ describes this so well

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    February 5, 2018
  6. Beautiful Lynn! xoxoxo

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    February 5, 2018
  7. So impactful, beautiful Lynn.

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    February 5, 2018
  8. Very nice Lynn! xo

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    February 5, 2018
  9. Moving with depth of emotion. 🌟

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    February 5, 2018
  10. So much hope and promise wrapped up in those three little words.
    Leslie

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    February 5, 2018
  11. Full of emotion. Words can hold so much. (K)

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    February 5, 2018
  12. Stunning writing, Lynn. What a turn-around with this one and such disillusionment at the end. Well done and so moving.

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    February 5, 2018
  13. Wonderfully worded, Lynn. Loved it.

    Hope you are doing great… ❤

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    February 5, 2018
  14. balindsey2015 #

    I would have liked a love button for this one. Beautifully said.

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    February 5, 2018
  15. Wonderful. But remember we are never so broken or fallen from Grace that we csnnot be retrieved! 🙂 ❤

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    February 5, 2018
  16. Wistful and dreamy. Beautiful piece, Lynn.

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    February 6, 2018
  17. Awesome poetry, Lynn. Your gift is shining.

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    February 6, 2018
  18. Wow! Lynn, this is good !!! and so deep !!!

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    February 6, 2018
  19. Wonderfully written, Lynn…the repetition works so well and then the crushing final stanza…’if only if only if only’. It is a treat to read your poems and writings, you have a gift and so much to share.

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    February 7, 2018
  20. ❤️

    Like

    February 7, 2018
  21. Your last verse held so much meaning Lynz .. Excellent

    Liked by 1 person

    February 9, 2018

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